Cathy
The style of your paper is good. I like that you ended your paper similar to the way you began it. One suggestion, you could try rearranging your paragraphs about the Rickson's so that the parargraphs are together. The evidence you used to support your claims is really good. All of your quotes seem relevant to the points you make. Your arguments are clear and logical. You could try connecting how Cayce's quest for humanity is important in such a globalized society and why people still need to have some individuality. Overall I thought your paper was good.