professorspoth 28 Oct 2009 15:02
A good effort on both of your parts, though some points could use some elaboration. For example, you refer to BSE and stenography in the summary, but don't show what these things are or why they're significant to the story. Likewise, the commentary tends to present some issues or common sticking points, but doesn't analyze why this particular style is being used at this time or whether the difficulty stems from the author or the reader. Overall, fairly good, but could use improvement. 35/40