professorspoth 02 Oct 2009 14:43
Aric:
Some good conceptual comments and suggestions for additions / subtractions here, though you might want to also address issues of grammar and style when you do peer review in the future. I'll give you full-credit for the review portion, though I'm going to have to dock you a few points on the draft portion since your draft was incomplete; in the future, try to get a complete draft on the page even if you KNOW you need to revise it heavily.
Peer Review: 35/35
First Draft: 30/35